Thursday, July 21, 2016

Baker and Liu

Baker and Liu

Baker

Baker is talking to kids that are in school. More Specifically to kids that are unsure about what to do, but in general to kids that are students going to school. It reveals that Baker wants to inspire kids unlike how Mr. Feagle. He targets kids that are afraid to do what they are good at.
In the reading Baker states "Mr. Feagle was notorious among city students for dullness and inability to inspire. Despite being dull, Mr. Feagle inspired Baker."Mr. Feagle had opened a door for me. Although Baker felt that he had a chance of being a good writer. The purpose of this essay was to express yourself an be able to do what you feel is right. The tone of this essay would be informal.


Liu

Liu uses description to describe his story about a china town visit. He describe in detail what he sees, hear, and how he felt. Liu narrates his story in an formal tone. It can give us a picture of the things that he "sense" by being specifically formal. Liu create a negative mood. It show how he felt visiting chinatown.




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